More in love with him than I've ever been
I'm aware of every hair upon his chin
Aware of his scent and the taste of his skin
Aware of the strength of his arms that I'm in
He smells of soap and lotion and such
I welcome his lips, their hungry touch
He tastes of dinner's chocolate and wine
His panting words meander through my mind
I love his body, the way that he moves
The way he excites, delights and soothes
His hands, they grope, roam and explore
They stroke and knock gently at my love door
I'm swimming in an awesome sea of delight
Enjoying every kiss, every nibble and bite
With gentle fingers I tug at his hair
I call him sweet names, I moan, I swear
Our passion ascends, my heart skips a beat
We scream in release of our scorching heat
Our bodies, wet, we explode in ecstasy
He has taken everything I have given from me
An act of love is a beautiful thing
A sacred ritual of dance and dream
An unbeatable creation that Creator did give
To ensure mankind would enjoy and live
I'm trapped in this dance of fate you see
In love with this man throughout eternity
I sigh and weep as I thank my God above
For him! My blessing of joy and love
This is a masterpiece and a classic write of love and romance. Your deep feelings reflect how open your heart is for that lucky guy you love. And that is what touches every reader in the soul. thanks
your friend abdi-noor
AWESOME! Now I am crying too - that's the truth. This has touched me very deeply. A true gift from God is this love and this man to you, Gwen... so much so that it makes you rise to perfection in all other areas of your body, mind and spirit. The flawless rhythm and breathiness in this passionate piece is testament to that! Reminds me of the raw energy of the film "Shakespeare In Love". Just stunning, thank you. LOL Kate xx
A pleasure to read of your love Gwen, and how much yuo enjoy and appreciate that Creator gave us this beautiful way to bless each other. Wonderfully written!
A Poetry´s compliance in a romantic depicting under the light
of memory of enjoyment, taking from the lexicon of a heart that
pumps sublimity the magic words to poetize this poem, has
delivered this poetic grand titled: "Enjoying Him".
This is an absolute gem in the crown of sensuous, romantic poetry!
"A sacred ritual of dance and dream"
That's what truly making love is all about.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2005
Don't bellieve I have ever read a better love poem. This piece of literary expertise honed in on what love is all about. Love is physiciall and with that physicial act all the other forms of love is born. I firmly believe this and you poem just bore me out. Fantastic. I will keep this one.
This is beautiful Gwen. Your love and desire paint a picture of a wonderful relationship that many never achieve yet to which we all aspire. Wonderful poetry.
Take care,
Sherry
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
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This is a masterpiece and a classic write of love and romance. Your deep feelings reflect how open your heart is for that lucky guy you love. And that is what touches every reader in the soul. thanks
your friend abdi-noor
Reindeer
And that is probably the best place to swim in the entire world, Gwen, and this is quite a poem.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Eileen
well Done!
peace
Rich Criso Suarez
A Poetry´s compliance in a romantic depicting under the light
of memory of enjoyment, taking from the lexicon of a heart that
pumps sublimity the magic words to poetize this poem, has
delivered this poetic grand titled: "Enjoying Him".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
This is an absolute gem in the crown of sensuous, romantic poetry!
"A sacred ritual of dance and dream"
That's what truly making love is all about.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Take care,
Sherry