Beware, My Would Be Lover (poem) by Gwen Dickerson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

was rambling about in here tonigh and ran across this earlier verse of yours...am glad I discovered it. The rhythm and flow of this piece is excellent and the message...it too is excellent and woe unto the man who does not heed the warnings!

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Hi, Gwen!

Thanks for your reviews!

I enjoyed this poem a lot, especially this imagery, which is reinforced by the strong alliteration of these lines:

lest,
I divert
an intense
focus
toward thee!

Bye for now!

Richard Vallance (Janke)
Ottawa, Ontario,
Canada

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Enjoyed the staccato rhythms and the "come get me if you dare" attitude.
But if you want to play with fire my sun sign is Leo, with Saggitarius rising and Aries in my moon sign. So how about a slice of chocolate cheesecake.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

This was great..I loved your strength in this poem,

just excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Sure you could not use a little temptation ? ;)

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

This was great !

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Hi Gwen,
Strong powerful one..
Love it....

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Super write!

Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Gwen,
Excellent write..Love it..
Hugs,
Be blessed,
Betty

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

A beautiful poem, Gwen but a little frieghtening for any suitor:) :)

Love form India - Joel -

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Gwen
Excellent write,
love the warnings
smooth and stealthy rhythm

William

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Wonderful write. I especially like that you mention you are happy already.
So you have something to offer besides need.
To be full of life so that we seek to share the gifts...not be them.
But then, in sharing...the bond becomes the ultimate gift, still only borrowed...but creating us.
Blessings,
John

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Sounds very interesting, Gwen. Are you taking applications? Excellent write, dear.

yf
tony

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

excellent write...mesmerizing....love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

wonderful verse Gwen;-) I too would like to know how that works...hahaha

Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

That's telling it like it is. Excellent verse.