Shhh Did you hear that (poem) by Gwen Dickerson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPY!

I don't think my poor cats would want to be in THIS situation!

:) :)

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Indeed we hear,we see but how many KNOW what the ghosts of past incarnations are conveying to us..Let's not allow fear to blind us to that which we must see in order to be free...look within the truth is there..bare!!

Vesna

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Yes I saw it , heard it and ran from it !
Hair raising poem

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

Spooooky! Great write, Gwen.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

I here it now Gwen ... all inside my heart.
Like I heard it in childhoods days. And I hear it in agony of how my yesterdays are barren and worrry about tomorrow. Bill

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

that was great Gwen
very Kool
Gwen....shhhhhhhhh.."listen to the night"
read it in my index

William

Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Yes I heard it, when I rocked on the cats tail after he ate the bat and the skeleton was the winner of last years hide and seek contest. the mind playing tricks can be a scary thing..good write

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I love it !!!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Ha! I remember those days, and that delicious tingle on the back of my neck...that is what this poem brought back! I loved it!

Reindeer

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

cOOL! i HEARD IT!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Hi Gwen,
Such a fabulous write.

Trixie :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

This is great Gwen...keep it handy for halloween;-)shhhhhh!

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I have a pocket full of breadcrumbs and I wont talk to anyone on the way home....
ooooooo...I love being scared too.
hehehe, great write.

Reviewed by Toris Okotie

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I'm counting my steps not to wake the bats. I love bats although they came be very distructive. Lovely write.
Yours poetically,
Toris

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I'm glad I didn't read this too close to bed time.
My last job I frequently had to remove bats from people's rooms. I grew rather fond of the little buggers.
But...shhhh, don't tell anyone.
John

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

LOL Yeah, I'm one of those kids too! lol Great write, Gwen! You make a great spooky story teller! :)

Reviewed by Lee Ennis

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

I heard that! Great piece!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

this scared the s*** outta' me! intense, scary read! *~*~*gasp/gasp/gasp/GASP*~*~* ((((HUGS)))) :0

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Dear Gwen, Excellent write. If I may interject, when felines hiss that is the time to get yourself out of the mix.:)

Tony

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

*chills*

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

what was THAT???

oh...sorry 'bout that...geez, this is a scary, intense write...play up to my fears, why don'tya?? LOL excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

Oh Gwen this one is so good.
Yikes I hate bats lol
"Shhh! Did you hear that?
Shhh! Did you feel that?
Shhh! Did you see that?
Shhhhhh! "
Peggy