Gwen,
Tis' true, this I know! Really enjoyed this write!
Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2003
I've lived in a couple of haunted houses. Friendly ghosts. Would hate to run into one of the other kind. I love the poem. Good luck on the ebook. I wish you many sales.
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Haunting and hypnotic, go, Gwen, Go! This bit is just so shuddery nice,
"Bitter memories of times gone by
lovers broken promises, whispered lies
remnant feelings of past disgraces
ever present on ghostly faces"
Good and classically ghoulish, eschewing gore for mood and imagination!
excellent piece although i have to say.. ( not that anyone would believe ) but i was brought up in a haunted house and she was friendly not evil at all.. ahh well i guss even ghosts are different..lol
great poem,,
steve.
This, Gwen, is too astoundingly true!!!!! Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Beautiful dark write!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Gwen,
This is excellent.
"In haunted places, in hidden spaces
in caves and abodes of fear and dread
demonic forces do lurk and wait
evoking feelings of doom and hate
Bitter memories of times gone by
lovers broken promises, whispered lies
remnant feelings of past disgraces
ever present on ghostly faces "
It is true left to root those very things can grow evil and hate within the heart making it bitter.
Peggy
Grab those side-irons, saddle up and join former Civil War sharpshooter Luther Henry for a ride into pure terror, western-style…think ‘Wild Wild West’ meets ‘The X-Files’.
Tis' true, this I know! Really enjoyed this write!
Hugs,
Maria
"Bitter memories of times gone by
lovers broken promises, whispered lies
remnant feelings of past disgraces
ever present on ghostly faces"
Good and classically ghoulish, eschewing gore for mood and imagination!
great poem,,
steve.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reindeer
I do know of Ghosts! Excellent Write!
tony
In Spirit,
Bear
This is excellent.
"In haunted places, in hidden spaces
in caves and abodes of fear and dread
demonic forces do lurk and wait
evoking feelings of doom and hate
Bitter memories of times gone by
lovers broken promises, whispered lies
remnant feelings of past disgraces
ever present on ghostly faces "
It is true left to root those very things can grow evil and hate within the heart making it bitter.
Peggy
Excellent.