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Look at you, you've changed so much to me, the girl who was once just a girl, is now much more to see. You're blonde and beautiful you're slim, looking fine your taste and opinions abstract, but refined. I can see you so soon, you'll be dazzling to me, when we stand in the crowds and you're perfect and free. You'll be there, gorgeous and gothic with me dancing pretty in pink, pretty is one thing that I'd love to be, but beauty is yours now I think.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I thought I'd be jealous of you outshining me, but I'm so happy for you! You're beautiful and brilliant!

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Reviewed by Delete Me (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

aaww charley I love you and I could never outshine you because you are so beautiful....

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

I love the optimism because so many teenagers feel so jealous and decide to take that road which is so horrid to take, and you haven't. Good choice. Good poem.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

Very pretty write Charlotte!
Jack

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

Beautiful is one thing you already are, Charley.
Keep 'em coming!
-James

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

Well done verse...love the positive attitude;-)!

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