I'd leave a thousand roses,
if I thought you'd see them there,
to let you know that never
in this life I'd cease to care.
I'd cry a thousand teardrops,
if I thought you'd ever know,
how much I've cried in all these years,
since when you had to go.
I'd find myself a thousand blades,
and shed my blood with each,
if I thought in my demise
I'd find myself within your reach.
I'd beg a thousand nightly prayers,
if I thought I had a cause,
but how could any god so great
slay hearts as pure as yours?
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Reviews of "A Thousand Roses"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
A very soulful and heartfelt piece of writing. I'm amazed at the talent of one so young. ~Joseph
Reviewed by Jesus
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
This is beautiful Charl, really really sweet :) This is probably my favourite poem out of everything you've written so far, it's so pretty! Well done babe :)
Reviewed by Claire Shaw (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
verrryyyyy good
Reviewed by Dan
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Good Poem
ur too good at this
and ur too confusing
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
ur too good at this
and ur too confusing
loves ya
jammy xx
Lovely poem.