Wow! I love the rhyme in this. It honestly flows off the page and off your tongue! Brilliant. I like the humbleness yet confidence in this poem of yourself. I especially adore the last stanza. I may be wrong, but I think a lot of girls our age feel like that, well, at least I know I do! I don't show myself clearly to many... if any, people. Brilliant write. Look forward to many more... if they can top this!
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2003
You're Charley, and I'm glad you are.
As a poem, this had great meter, Charley. Well done. As far as you go... you are a light in this Den; we are lucky to have you.
-James
Wow! This is unbelievable charl, I don't know if everyone else will think the same thing, but this poem really does say everything. This is undoubtedly the best you've ever written, there's no topping this.
The sequel to Goalden Girl. Gemma's school football team is well-established. Her young step-sister Portia is also becoming a promising player, until an accident changes her life forever
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good one tracle :-)
jammy xxx
~Nikki~
peggy
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
As a poem, this had great meter, Charley. Well done. As far as you go... you are a light in this Den; we are lucky to have you.
-James
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$