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godless
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I hope that you aren't lonely,
and I hope that you don't cry,
and I hope that you aren't sad when
you are watching from your sky.

I hope your days in heaven,
are greater than mine are,
and that when darkness comes
the sky is clear to see the stars.

I hope that rain falls softly,
and the day sky is soft and blue,
because it's the least you deserve,
after how they've taken you.

Here, the days are cold and lonely,
and the nights just last too long,
and the clouds won't let me see you,
and rain falls hard and strong.

I know one day we'll see you,
and I hope you'll understand,
that we had to stay behind until
we could bear to hold your hand.

For to touch an angel's fingers,
and to feel an angel's light,
is too much for the godless heart
and for the godless sight.

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Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Excellence in poetry. Very nice.

Michael

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Wow, this is very poignant....truly tender and heartfelt.

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
This is an extremely revolutionary perspective that you took on as the narrator of this poem. Extraordinary, Charlotte. Like a nighttime day-dream, it runs very fluidly. That last stanza is marvellous. THIS is your poetry.. beautiful.

In Prayer, Brittany

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
'For to touch an angel's fingers,
and to feel an angel's light,
is too much for the godless heart
and for the godless sight'

Beautifully sad, Charlotte...

Reviewed on February 2, 2004
Oh wow, now this is powerful!


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