This is an extremely revolutionary perspective that you took on as the narrator of this poem. Extraordinary, Charlotte. Like a nighttime day-dream, it runs very fluidly. That last stanza is marvellous. THIS is your poetry.. beautiful.
In Prayer, Brittany
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2004
'For to touch an angel's fingers,
and to feel an angel's light,
is too much for the godless heart
and for the godless sight'
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Michael
In Prayer, Brittany
and to feel an angel's light,
is too much for the godless heart
and for the godless sight'
Beautifully sad, Charlotte...