night falls
shadows
suggest themselves
around everyday objects,
tree and fence, stile and barn
carefully wrapped and
hidden away
in the evening damp
like toys in the nursery,
carefully set away
for the next day's play
night falls
in the growing dusk
young lovers
rush joyfully bedward
cares abandoned
with the day's clothes strewn-
hopes embraced
with passion's ardor
night falls
and the sojourner,
travel stained and road weary,
careworn, hopeless, and save for one,
settles down
for sleep
for rest
for peace
at the last
rich in imagery, each word stands alone in power and magnificence. BRAVO! multi-layered, sensoral--a masterpiece! truly, one of your best (along with "wawatay, the people are dancing," my other favorite)
Each verse is very good poetry,I think my favorite was the first,very beautiful and vivid to my inner eye.Each verse different in the feelings,(1./ made me feel contentment,2./gave me feeling of happiness,3.made me feel sad.)
This poem covers many emotions...well done!
Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks.
"Murder isn't usually this
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
rich in imagery, each word stands alone in power and magnificence. BRAVO! multi-layered, sensoral--a masterpiece! truly, one of your best (along with "wawatay, the people are dancing," my other favorite)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
This poem covers many emotions...well done!
Love Tinka
Sandie May Angel
Thanks for sharing!...Eileen