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The Church -- a reflection -- part 1
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This is first part of an ongoing work of theological, and personal reflection.

The poem was occassioned by a moment of insight in a particular building of particular denomination, but the reflection is on the church universal.

As an ongoing work later parts may be suggested by reader's comments.



i.
sitting in the beginner's seat
behind the font
in the baptistery
keeping the church opened
on a Monday noon
I reflect

the Church seems
quaint,
antiquated,
stuck in the mud

those who do not love her
or know her
see only her zits,
her foibles,
her ugliness
and despise her

those who know her
see her zits,
foibles and weakness
her ugliness
an love her
knowing her imperfections
as their own


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 Reviews of "The Church -- a reflection -- part 1"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 8, 2005
true

Reviewed on April 11, 2005
John,

SPOT ON!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 10, 2005
It'a very hard to cover such a complex subject in this poetry forum. I give you credit for trying...I was in a non-denominational group for a year discussing problems with what church has become. There were jews,catholics,baptists methodists,nazarenes assembly,apostolic,
lutheran,and a few others. I conluded that church had become a social affair more than a place of learning and worship. Too many outside activities to discuss, pot lucks,ice cream socials fund raisers, retreats,sports activities etc,just to mention a few. I think God gets left out too much in this present era of church goers. Thanks for sharing John!

Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
John, I've got quite a complex relationship with the church and will follow these with great interest. Thanks, Dawn

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
I think that those who know her and have loved her, have left her still loving her as a bad parent. But this is an individual matter, between God and ourselves. I am respectful of the devout, but I go my own way having been "rejected" by my "Mother"...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
Most interesting..thanks for posting this!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
You are right and I have had one say that he was rewriting the Bible and put all these things into it that really aren't true. He said the 95% percent that read it have never read the Bible and approved of what he is attempting to do. Yes this is a distorted view of the church and you have put this to paper very well.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
I do go to church and respect it.
At my church we discuss how the church is us, and how best we can try to discern how to be a positive force in the world.
Reaching out to the less fortunate and poor does not bring income, so it is difficult to do what we feel is right and afford to keep much outreach going.
Since we don't traffic in fear money or hush money it is more difficult.
Makes life interesting.
Good poem John. I appreciate these thoughts.
John


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