Rain and Yearning (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2006

Your poetry moves me to spend every waking hour in the passionate search of sensual desire from the heat of the day to the cool of the night and every beautiful natural gift in between. Give me the strength, oh give me the strength!

Ron

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 6, 2006

A very beautiful poem, skillfully penned.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

Susan you have me mesmerized, again;-) Wow! the sensuality drips like a fine misty rain,that tastes like a vintage wine...I almost feel like a voyeur watching the action,you write with such passion!

Awesome!

eT

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

Hot and heavy as we would say when we were teenagers, this one puts the reader into your boudoir and breathing heavy from the first line. My kinda write. I love it and the sincere passion that is offered.

Felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

Lols..Laughing at Kate's comments below
I don't know about other men, and I won't presume to speak for them,
but as the old saying goes in Ireland " I love it morning, noon and night...:) "
Very passionate poetry, Susan
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

This is stunning, passionate poetry; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

Steady up, Kate... C, that is!! Are we talkin Gold Members only, I wonder?? Doubt it!! :)) But MY GOODNESS, this is so, so beautiful, Susan and you put your tongue and finger deftly on the spots of the imagination and senses that want to taste the bouquet of each word you have written here like sampling the finest of wines. This poem certainly rolls around the palette like a good Rioja (my passion!!)... and around the hips like a good... something else! Better go before I get completely out of hand...!! :)) Subtle and delicate as well as sensuous - unlike this review! Tremendous, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

You are on a roll girl!!

This is so very well written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

Another masterful confession of weather problems. You are the best at this kind of writing. And,I'll get back to you on it!" - Bill

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

The passion in this is incredible and as I can already see will touch the male members here in wonderful ways. Men just love the mornings don't they........and we don't mind do we? :-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2006

Uh, the weather really does things to ya, huh, huh, huh? Beautiful and very, very sensuous poetry. I read each word and line slowly so as to soak your passion up. I think I did. I know I did. This was damn good.