Undone (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 9, 2006

I shared with LeRoy my green eyes for your work today, Susan!! :)) You have a gift for making each nerve-end tingle with your tantalising imagery that is passionate and yet wholly appropriate, as if each word and nuance were an indelible work of art, put together in the perfection of ideal light, preferred shade and perfect utterance. You make vocabulary really work for you and no word is ever out of place. And you make it seem so EFFORTLESS!! Intuitively you seem to "touch the poetic G-spot" with the taste and delicacy of a perfect Lady. I'm in awe. "Marry every ounce of flesh" is positively Shakespearian and "Move into me gently Burst my urgent spires" causes earth to move in my book!! :)) My hat's off to you, dear Susan... and everything else, come to think of the mood I'm in today... but I'll get over it! I must seriously get into Mr Kahlil Gabran... TY and bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 9, 2006

Stunning poetry Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on May 9, 2006

You're a fine poet, no matter what the subject. After this one, a very well written work, I'm wondsering what you have in mind... bringing together, outdoor nature, and the acts of love; where, how, when? Please show us.
- Bill

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on May 9, 2006

A blistering and scorching write, that sets the Den alight tonite with sheer passion and romance...
I love the intensity you display in all your compositions, Susan...
Peter

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

Again you prove to be the master. Beautiful, cloud-burst loving and savoring journey to bliss acheived and shared. Art

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

um is it hot in here? or is it just me? fabulous sensual write

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

You are fast becoming AD's sensuous poet. Never mind that "fast becoming," I think you are already here. Hot. Sizzling.

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

~~Susan~~this burns like canyon heat in August~~gotta go blaze my six string to release~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

You are the mistress of the dawn with these spicy writes of passion and sensuality.The man who shares your bed and morning sunrises will be a wealthy man rich in the passions of your body and yourmind. Well done dear Sue.

Felix

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

Susan,

I am undone by the passion in this write!! Well done, what a way to start morning! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on May 8, 2006

I love the way it finishes. actually, I love the whole thing. Nicely done.