I can relate to much of the sentiments expressed within your poem, Susan. I respect also the workmanship of rhyme and rhythm that give a flow to your offering. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
This is fantastic and magical yet also hauntingly sad. I love it Susan and the grace that this woman character portrays with the voice of your words. Great stuff.
Fee
This one is real. Why do I keep thinking of soiled (soyled) clouds?
Ron
Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
~~Susan~~i'll tell ya what,no hell in this poem..wonderful,as always~
~~martin~~
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Gotta watch those doilied one's with all that bric-a-brac lacing around the edges. Loved the mood and tone and premise of this well-done poem, Susan. It has that woe-is-me-get-that-cloud-away-from-my-head style, but then . . . but then . . . it got righteous and lifted that head from those knees wet from bawling all damn night. Yes! This one took.
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Great rhythmic flow...
An exceptional poem the theme expertly covered, superb form!
love,
eT
such is womans fate, when she trust a man
out of lessons......came this masterful poetry
here's wishing you continued intelligent writes, with happier themes
pax A
Regis
Fee
Ron
~~martin~~
It's good to keep our heads up in those clouds.....:)
We might just must meet a fellow traveller...
Love and Light
Peter