"You can't get home if you don't take your foot off of third base."
"Write a poem about me," he asked...
Gentleman caller...offering a task
Perhaps a sonnet or Haiku...
Would do
Maybe of passion
In color...no blue
Cobalt the color of a colder climate
Won't work for him
He's a Libre ..no doubting
I know...
I'll pen the simplest of fate
Your bases are loaded
Now walk to the plate
"Batter up", with eyes squinched tight
He swings with such power
It's G_O_N_E
Out of sight!
Yes!
And you are 'Out of sight' as they say, loved this, Susan and it brought a much needed smile to me at this time, so Batter Up and what a piece, hope much to read more of you soon, somehow, oh Thank You for this and much more...
for now, love and peace to you,
me
Nothing is more rewarding to a person than to have something written about them. Especiallyy, is this true of one who admires the writer. Yes, all the bases were loaded here, when Susan hit a well pitched one ..... outta de old ball paaaark! ! !
Excellant write and fine tribute to your friend. He, I know I would be, must be thrilled with this analogy. You pride in him and his strength show through especially in the last line, and I love the graphic.
hugs,
Fee
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And you are 'Out of sight' as they say, loved this, Susan and it brought a much needed smile to me at this time, so Batter Up and what a piece, hope much to read more of you soon, somehow, oh Thank You for this and much more...
for now, love and peace to you,
me
Unity unwavering Belle ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Paul;-)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Susan
Love the caption too...
- Bill, who loves poetry and baseball...
hugs,
Fee
Eternal Love, Dove
You rock Sis!;-)
This is a home run...
Catch that ball
Peter
delightful write Susan
you do well in so many styles.........very visual
paxA