Dreams...the wasteland of all our misery...
The harbor of our passions and joys...
Pleasures and expectations of life...
Its the Id that speaks to us...
Of possibilities and consistencies of past life's...
Its the inner voice that tells us its okay to think...
Further than the norm...
Its a release and a lesson to be savored
Its a punishment for trespasses of guilt...
And its pleasures personified when love is true ....
And held close to the soul.
Dreams are of the spirit or is from the demons...
Of consciousness in a twilight...
Its the inner voice of reason and its the tattle of guilt...
Dreams are the cinema of the soul.
excellent attitude and wisdom,Susan ... dreams are the cinema of the soul ... they are the magic of who we are and the wonder of what we are becoming ... they are are oversoul conversing with us and designing the props within all our developing realities ... they reflect our psychological state of being as well as our spiritual stature ...
Outstanding write punctuated by a very outstandingly relevant cosmic-seeing illustration! Quite an experience to have read Sandie Angel's poem on dreams just before coming to this one and then experiencing such a dynamic contrast in style and perspective between the two-- while both retain their own character (of course) and accomplished qualities. One of the studious benefits I guess of reading good stuff on AD:-)
Aberjhani
Absolutely, Susan. I wonder why my dreams are so scary, when I detest horror movies....maybe my fears haunt my sleep? Deeply penned, thought provoking excellence.
I really like this. In 15 lines you have so explored dreams. Dreams have always been so interesting to me. I remember two songs by Roy Orbison about dreams that I really loved and your write just reminded me of them immediately. In Dreams and Dream. Do you remember them?
So many dreams I never remember, but the ones I do, seem so real. They can be of happy times, mixed up times, of love and passion, all that we have experienced in life somehow make it into our dreams.
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2006
Wonderful inspiring piece...
"Dreams...the wasteland of all our misery...
The harbor of our passions and joys...
Pleasures and expectations of life... "
Excellent.
This is a pure Susan poem, pure in that it is the truth and as we read and reread we realize your wisdom in matters of heart and soul. Well done my dear friend, well done.
Your writing makes dreams almost understandable, but, of course, you're the detective of the mysterious and baffling. Enjoyed this one - and feel as if I know more about dreams. (Yeah. Uh Huh !)
- Bill
Thank you!!
Love Tinka
write with the flair of a master poet! Dreams are
akin to breathing, a needed exercise.
Love,
Eileen
Ron
Aberjhani
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Every line a gem, Susan.
Elizabeth
I really like this. In 15 lines you have so explored dreams. Dreams have always been so interesting to me. I remember two songs by Roy Orbison about dreams that I really loved and your write just reminded me of them immediately. In Dreams and Dream. Do you remember them?
Aubrey
When we start thinking outside the box, then all sensational permutations and possibilities begin to emerge..
Scintillating poetry
Love and Light
Peter
"Dreams...the wasteland of all our misery...
The harbor of our passions and joys...
Pleasures and expectations of life... "
Excellent.
Fee
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
- Bill