Explore Your Future (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

Is that you on the rock? This one is inspiring. Unfortunately, so many conspire to make it hard to reach higher.

Ron

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

You seem to analize everything, past and present, try to look further, and then write all your thoughts down in rhyme, This is so excellent, You tell the story of the hopes of us all that the future of just one life can cause to come true. Thank You Pierre

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

you climb then carry your reader to enlightened mount of being ... the advise you bring is to never cease climbing ...

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

really special--this is one of your best--i really love "ball up and roll toward the blue" cheers and hope u get caught up

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

The chances are new that what's beating in you
Is a future waiting to be explored. <-------------THAT LINE ALONE, is a gift.... Brilliance..

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

Great advise, given in an optimistic voice........
straight from the heart :)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

Hey you Belle-o-the-ball!

Great write filled with wisdom and good advice. And the image - oh yeah - been there done that many times. Love it Love it Love it! Glad you're back.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

Great advice dear Susan!!

All settled in???

love Tinka

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

Excellant advice to help anyone misdirected by life.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

Go a step further to lasso your dream
Without being scared or timid

Marvelous advice for anyone, Susan.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

Such a timely message for your friend, and another, up the road a bit from your Macon Town. The message is outstanding... and I caught the gist and the cadence right away. You're a rare writer, and this morning, I just loooooooo-ve ya'! - Bill

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

Great encouragement for your friend. Sometimes our old poems give us great pleasure. Victor

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

Splendid write Susan, the great outdoors has many facets to be explored.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

Exceptional poem -- your rhyme and meter are perfect, Susan.
Well done!
Love,
CJ