I'm all out of words lately and working on the Spring edition of The Dead Mule.
Please forgive the old and make way for Spring. With love to all here,
Susan
Time...On Hold
by Susan Kathryn de Vegter
I am a weathered soul they say, from centuries before
I've been a part of everyone and sobbed through senseless wars
Been mired within your sorrow,stillborn within my fears
I've seen the world change each time and more and more the years
Have added up to sameness with likened old worn souls
They interchange through timeless space mere seconds, still "On Hold'
I wonder of my purpose, where are the answers found?
The answers all you try to give is gracious but earth bound
I know, for instance, that your spirit, perception and religion
Is all the same in relevance, call it intuition
I feel your wishes and destain, I see inside your dreams
Those times when eyes say everything,I'm in your heart it seems
I sense tomorrow and your smile, I taste the salt of tears
I've worn your shoes a thousand times through years and years and years
Spirits live inside us all their whisper beckons others
Then energies connect each one brother unto brother
Hearts are lifted light as air or weighted down with rocks
Can't take being all couped up then think outside the box
Greet your angel ,connect the energies, listen from inside
Know that hope and faith are housed deep within life's ride
Your spirit is as old as mine but not too obligated
If I can recall my past forms, opt for a choice then take it
I'd dwell with centuries logic bound with knowledge beyond years
While some of you stunt your growth with doubt and senseless fears
You? Out of words? I don't think that could be possible; you went out of the box on this top drawer poem! A keeper, most definately; much power and truth in emotional verse--exquisite!
Spirits live inside us all their whisper beckons others
Then energies connect each one brother unto brother
Hearts are lifted light as air or weighted down with rocks
Can't take being all couped up then think outside the box
Greet your angel ,connect the energies, listen from inside
Know that hope and faith are housed deep within life's ride
FABULOUS summation, in a nutshell... What a fantastic oak of learning grows from this poetic acorn, Susan. TY and be well, channelling your copious energies into the here and now, wherever that might be for you at this time. All the best with The Dead Mule! Remember... He ain't heavy... He's your brother!! :)) LOL K xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
While some of you stunt your growth with doubt and senseless fears...
Deep, introspective etheral write Susan. Sureal in context and written with a message of wisdom.
Edwin
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2007
Susan, this is extremly spirit filled and I get the meaning of every beautiful line.Your muse is active, powerful and this one is one of your finest I have ever encountered..
From the Caribbean Sea to Machu Picchu in Peru, and from birds to flowers and butterflies, Reflections and Treasured Wonders offers a collection of images gathered from around the world.
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
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You? Out of words? I don't think that could be possible; you went out of the box on this top drawer poem! A keeper, most definately; much power and truth in emotional verse--exquisite!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Good luck with the dead mule. :)
Then energies connect each one brother unto brother
Hearts are lifted light as air or weighted down with rocks
Can't take being all couped up then think outside the box
Greet your angel ,connect the energies, listen from inside
Know that hope and faith are housed deep within life's ride
FABULOUS summation, in a nutshell... What a fantastic oak of learning grows from this poetic acorn, Susan. TY and be well, channelling your copious energies into the here and now, wherever that might be for you at this time. All the best with The Dead Mule! Remember... He ain't heavy... He's your brother!! :)) LOL K xx
You really have thought outside the square....
(The dead mule?) :)
God Bless,
Michael
Fee
love you,
simonb
"Dead Mule" ... when its together this spring send a link ...
Edwin
Blessings & Love, Jo