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Comings and Goings
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Comings and goings are expected
Its what life's all about
Living and giving_ connected
In ones we take in and leave out
Decisions can make us stronger
Enforce the spirits within
As we grow with all positive connections
We adopt from the gifts of our friends
It enhances the character within us
To make positive the spirits we have
For some who opt for the negatives
Their character developes so sad
We are obligated to structure ourselves
Into people we'd all like to meet
In harmony we then stay connected
As we bid all the negatives to flee
In doing we structure our character
To be forceful in a positive way
We then become bonded together
To give others our best everyday.


 

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 Reviews of "Comings and Goings"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
An outstanding Enjoyable write

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Daibhidh MacAdhaimh
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
We then become bonded together
To give others our best everyday.

A most compelling conclusion for which we strive to enter into the good of.
Reading this brought a number of thoughts to mind, e.g, 'Life, like an orange skin, is a peeling away,' (Arthur Miller, Death of a Salesman). We throw away the skin leaving the goodness inside for folk to delight in. 'Love your neighbour as yourself' (Christ). In other words, before we can have a positive impact on our neighbour, we have to come to terms positively with ourselves.

Positivism is idealistic. We know that of itself it has no material impact, it cannot physically change anything. However, with us as agent we can indeed be 'forceful (or influential) in a positive way' through our words and actions:)

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
"Decisions can make us stronger" something I need to learn. excellent write. Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Indeed, I thought I was alone too....
Lets talk bout it behind the potting shed...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Never negative is a double negative. So it is positive?

Ron

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
a Good write with my much meaning for me. Lady J

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Meaningful write Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Indeed! Well said Susan and I know in your words you offer us nothing less than your best each time you post one of your lovely writes. Thank you for always being here to bring smiles to our souls.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Susan,

Beautiful, meaningful poetry: well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I've missed you ......

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
And Susan, you sure do.
Thank you.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
nice, 'bid all the negatives to flee'. great to read you again. keep that going and coming alive!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 9, 2007
So good to read you again Susan you are missed. This is a grand poem the kind I love best of yours.Thanks for uplifting our thoughts!
Hope all stays well with you and yours! Happy Mother's day!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 9, 2007
all my life, i always did my best to revert those negative vibrations away from me and to those i was close to ... i learned by channeling positivity, the negative energy diminished in severity and in its likelihood of reoccurring ... having a positive outlook goes a long way ...

motivationally solid poem ...

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on May 9, 2007
Philosophic pen! welcome back... :)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 9, 2007
Splendid characterization of having a positive attitude.

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack
Reviewed on May 9, 2007
This sure is true. I like the comings though better. It surely is better when we know the bondings have occurred.


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