The splendor of a moment worn slightly on the lips
The satisfied reflection of a passion slowly sipped
Either in a memory or filtered through a dream
Or a quiet conversation not meaning anything
But silently reflected worth... Oh! So much more
That grows with every thought process to permeate your pores
It's crazy how a moment can bring the treasures here
When you least expect the passion emerges from somewhere
Not much to begin with...this crazy trip for two
But since my thoughts have fermented
The more I dream of you.
Copyright 2007
Susan Kathryn de Vegter
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Reviewed by Frank Stein (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
real nice, Susan. I appreciate the use of good rhyme and meter, all wrapped around intelligent poetry !
Love it! Love It! Love It! Susan!!!
:)
A fitful passion for two, with lips that ensue!
Love your imagery!
Love the pict. of happiness and glee!
Warm hugs and Blessings! Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo
Your thoughts always bring a visual of effects...effects that show how one can immerse themselves and find the passion within a word...through the view of lips...
As silently as two ships passing in the night on a long stretch of deserted ocean for a few moments of time the lights of each others ships bring a strange but warm feeling of intimacy so too is the fleeting kiss. Lovely write dear Susan...lovely indeed.
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
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A fitful passion for two, with lips that ensue!
Love your imagery!
Love the pict. of happiness and glee!
Warm hugs and Blessings! Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo
The more I dream of you.
"Lips" shines with all that you are.
Walt
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Love this, Pierre.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
God bless you. Kathy
hugs
fee
Keep dreaming, this is a beauty.
Connie
Love,
ET