I'll not ask that you love me or beg you for your time
If it isn't what is possible
Then keep it...nevermind
Life is such a short spurt
Here on earth with you
I'll not whine on cause you snubbed me
I won't allow myself the blues
You see what matters most here
Is the quality of time
If your time for me is short lived
Then keep it, nevermind
You see love is forever
It needs nourishment from you
I can't be bothered when there's no chance
Of getting time from you
Just walk on by me quickly
Don't even stop to pause
The distance now is fathomless
There really is no cause
Keep your eyes focused
I haven't any rhymes
Wasting my day is fruitless
Even when I had the time.
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Reviews of "Nevermind"
Reviewed by April Ortega (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
Love needs a key and most of the time the key never fits. A woman so independant and knowing exactlly what she wants is a woman who knows her heart and only those who she can trust. Great write.
Love ya, April
Susan, These words you have written, are those of wisdom and insight. This message you bring applies to anyone in your life, no matter if they are a significant other, a child, a friend, co-worker this poem tells it like it is. Life is too short to waste a single moment..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Very emotional feelings pouring out in this one
Susan and for everyone, me included, who has ever been snubbed by love this rings so close to the heart. Very well done.
...sometimes...there is more love held within one...than to be shared by two...and in passing...there are more moments not lost...until love becomes more than a pass.
John
I love this one, my dear Susan . . . The pain and anger (yes, there is anger too) leaps out at the reader, and I dare say there will not one person who reads this that don't correlate it to themselves . . . THAT, is what you do . . . You put us right there with you . . . Standandtakeabow . . .
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
Love ya, April
This is an old poem . Not an old post! It's never been here on AD until yesterday.
Happy New Year!!!
Love to all!
Susan
Happy New Year Anyways!!
Love Tinka :)
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Whining has it's own rewards if only for a moment.
I wonder if therapists see all their patients as whiners?
Hmmmm.
Walt
Susan and for everyone, me included, who has ever been snubbed by love this rings so close to the heart. Very well done.
Fee
Is the quality of time
How so very true.
Wasted time is a crime..
Susan, have a Prosperous & Healthy 2008
Ron
Happy New Year,
Eileen
Good energy in this piece of writing.
My best wishes for a year that will give you all that you want and deserve.
Axilea
Love, Pierre
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
John