It's all about passion I'm telling you
It's energy in a turbine
It's familiar and lusting and yearning
It's me and yours and it's time
I know what you're thinking this moment
It's all in my head from you
It tingles and catches the atoms
In chaos it's telling the truth
My knees are weak from humming
Intuned to the beat of your heart
It's coming and going so quickly
It's shooting out sparks in the dark
Profound and juiced up with passion
With fissures breaking the seams
Volcanic eruptions in climaxes
It flows and it rumbles and screams
Passion is hunting for answers
It won't leave my energies alone
It's time that you hop on this soul train
To bring that good loving on home.
This poem is hot and awesome Suzzie!
As I watch you steam your way along the hot tracks of love!
WArmest Blessings of LOVE, Inner Peace and hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxooo
STay Positive!
Now there is an offer that would be hard to turn down, great write...full of passion.fire and soul.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Enough of this wordplay . . . Where can we meet? . . . Behind the Green Door, maybe? . . . LOL . . . I had to respond . . . WoW!! . . . Steaming . . .
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
It's time that you hop on this soul train <---- the mind boogles, lol.
Can almost hear a desperation in the telling, with the poetic voice.
Clever writing...
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
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As I watch you steam your way along the hot tracks of love!
WArmest Blessings of LOVE, Inner Peace and hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxooo
STay Positive!
Ron
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Dan
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John
Love, Pierre
Stay southern and keep writing.
Ed
hugs
Fee
Can almost hear a desperation in the telling, with the poetic voice.
Clever writing...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.