I go beyond expected to a world of possibilities
I never say I can't and won't accept negativity
I deal in worlds beyond the now and live in dreams that reel
I see the unexpected and know just how you feel
It's what I've known for ages and thought all were the same
I thought that my acquaintances to be like me...untamed
I never knew that in my world was this amazing place
Where often times I knew the man even though he had no face
I see the unexpected or feel the truth is close
When most content themselves with fact I sometimes overdose
Upon the world outside the box I finally feel at home
With metaphysical fathoms that allow my dreams to roam
A Pisces can transend the worlds humans rarely see
It's all a part of daily life when you finally believe
Come fly with me to distant lands or transgress time immortal
Into a world of mystery or deal with life aborted
Dare to live and step beyond the powers of the mind
You just may find that in your quest you leave this world behind !
Susan, I had to think about this one: I agree that freeing oneself from useless, painful fears is an important step forward. Fears hold us back and this is an invitation to fly and be free.
Axilea
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Excellent-as a Libra I won't accept Negativity either
STAY POSITIVE! YOU GOT THAT RIGHT Suzzie! :)
NOMATTER what comes our way!
STAY POSITIVE! I must say again, as I sign off my friend!
Write On!
Love THIS Heart write!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheoxooo
There is no negativity here, Susan. Your poem is very positive, both in showing your beliefs and in expressing how we should keep a bright outlook about things.
Your metaphysical mind is flowing within verse...a quality that can find one beyond the grips of reality and within worlds unknown...I like this escape ...
This postitive outlook and epitimy of your soul reflects the ambition of the mind alive and always striving for improvement.
Very good advice as well to others who may be floundering and just need a little encouragement from the world.
Fee
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2008
Reminds me of the quote on my front page....
"Whatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power and magic in it!' Goethe
words lift as if by wing and in all the positive one finally takes a breath...endless dreams which give words of hope with which to run on forever in flight.
brilliant Susan
John
Such a beautiful mind you have, You are at home outside the box, I know this about you for sure, I also know that your dreams are as boundless as the universe itself, Great message here, We must empower
ourselves and never accept the negative. Love This!
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A young student is interested in learning coding programs. He applies and is rejected because of his age. He does not give up and tries again and is accepted. Eventu
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Axilea
NOMATTER what comes our way!
STAY POSITIVE! I must say again, as I sign off my friend!
Write On!
Love THIS Heart write!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheoxooo
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Lov eTinka
Regis
I enjoyed this.
Thanks,
Jill
And you will get stroger a little bit...every day.
Georg
nice , Susan...
Very good advice as well to others who may be floundering and just need a little encouragement from the world.
Fee
"Whatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power and magic in it!' Goethe
brilliant Susan
John
ourselves and never accept the negative. Love This!
Love, Pierre
BEAUTIFULLY inspired/inspiring; thank you! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(