If the Shoe Fits (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

A nice fable. So why do I still want a wild, wanton woman over a civil spinster?

Ron

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

Nice work Susan...sometimes we know ourselves better than we realize...it is that underlying wisdom that can bring us to our senses...

nice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

Today love has lost its meaning to let's do it now and forget about the consequences. Good one Susan in view of all the abortions that are taking place where conscience has been subverted and pleasure rules our head.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Amen!

"I'd rather use my wisdom
With the passion of my wits" for without passion, one is just another 'nit wit'

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Very wise and real...you speak the words that most of us feel but cant' always express.
Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

I love this poem! You have been missed so much. So glad to be reading your words of wisdom and light.
Much peace, love, and light, my dear friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Well said logic, Susan. Well done.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

I'd rather use my wisdon
With the passion of my wits
It makes more sense to rally round
A shoe that really fits!

I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you share within your verses here, Susan. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Wizened words.........
Comfortable as an old pair of Levi's.

~W~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Yes it does make more sense, but we are a fickle people for the most part, and yearn often for shoes which are far more than we bargained for.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

a nicely offered bit of wisdom-very nice!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Good write, Susan; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on November 6, 2009

Intuition and wisdom go hand in hand...If the Shoe Fits is sobering wisdom by the responsibility of a looser fitting shoe than the remorse of a tight fitting bunion...when lust is first hand knowledge, when we crawl into bed with it, we want that pair of shoes that really fits! Susan, I'd love to sit around a campfire with you too, so thanks for mentioning it...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on November 6, 2009

I absolutely agree. Good write.

Reviewed by Eugene Williams

Reviewed on November 6, 2009

warm and wonderful

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on November 6, 2009

ONE CAN NEVER GO WRONG WITH 'WISDOM' THAT COMES STRAIGHT FROM THE HANDS OF GOD...GOD'S WAY IS ALWAYS RIGHT...THE SHOE ALWAYS FITS!
A REALLY GOOD WORK THAT BRINGS A WELL WRITTEN, TIMELY MESSAGE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS