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Forever Friend
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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It is easier to speak of a masterpiece
Than to create one yourself
It is passe' to border illusion
If we only collect regret
And it's human to act negative
While Godly to be esteemed
But immortal to leap boundaries
That are precious in our dreams
Fear can be a teacher
It's there to make us strong
It's okay to be a failure at times
And it's mortal to be wrong
You can live inside the box today
If the painting is yours but for mine
It would be of far more interest to me
If I painted outside the lines
To age is something that bothers us all
From infancy to the end
But I'd rather outgrow my body my love
Then live on as a forever friend.

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 Reviews of "Forever Friend"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
nicely done

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
A true friend is for life and is always there by your side come thick or thin. Hope you find that true friend Susan

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 18, 2004
Ahh, a perfect poem painted outside the lines, with inspiration told. Be it on canvas or on parchment, you do it all justice with your talent. Excellently done.
Allen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
Excellent Susan.....I got the feeling of a "thank you but no thank you" relationship......to be or not to be....no halfway!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
If I painted outside the lines

you have done so very eloquently ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Excellent Poetry have missed you Susan.
Peace
Peg

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
You Live to Be 195 Years Old -You Still Have 1 True Friend Consider Yourself Fortunate As All Rest Be But Acquaintances_

Great Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Very, very beautiful

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
this whispered to me Susan, through cracks I live in, and your message uttered clear, well gathered, so succinct, ty al

Reviewed on January 16, 2004
A profound write.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Beautiful, loved what you had to say here,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Susan,
Do you paint? Was noticing that many of your works
speak as a painter or an artist of some kinesthetic form.
This caught me by surprise, as I thought it was addressing
one thing, when it ultimately addressed something very different.
Vicky

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Pulled me in. I wanted to get close to this one.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Well mine are all master pieces, so I can't comment:)) ending is very profound once it sinks in!


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