AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Robin Ouzman Hislop, iShirley Francis-Salley, iLisa DAnnolfo Levey, iJ. Allen Wilson, iDarryl Jenkins, iErin Kelly-Moen, iFrances Altman, iR.E.E.S Blogs Linda Smith, Publisher, iConnie Amarel, iTodd Cheney, i

  Home > Mainstream > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

D.J. Ludlow

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· 85 Titles
· 213 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

D.J. Ludlow, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!


Books by
D.J. Ludlow



See all Books
by D.J. Ludlow



Look Up", They Say, "Look Up"
by D.J. Ludlow → (All Poetry by D.J. Ludlow)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

(Wise coalminers of old took canaries down the mines to monitor for poisonous gases. It was the smart - and long lived - miner who kept one eye on the bird.

But what would YOU do if your attention is called elsewhere, if you are told to pay it no heed?

Go to the hospitals, the nursing homes, the haunts of the disabled - the cemeteries. Your answer lies there!)

Look up, they say, look up!
Behold the glorious view.
The coalface glitters like diamonds,
Such wealth is there waiting for you.
Black gold is there for the taking,
And a little with you we will share.
So look up, look up to the coalface,
And shield not your eyes from the glare.

Half my life I gazed at the coalface
As I scrabbled and scratched for my wage.
But my health's now all but left me,
And the next pit I'll see is the grave.
My tools lay about me now useless.
And what little strength is left I must keep.
But as I stumbled and fell at my station,
I gazed in horror to the ground at my feet


Look up, look up to the coalface,
They say to those who are left.
The clerk, the labourer, the assistant,
The secretary, and all of the rest.
Look up, look up to the coalface,
Fix your mind on the pick in your hand
Heed not the fallen beside you,
Or their call to look where you stand.

But half my life I had been gazing upward,
Pick and shovel firmly in hand.
But now I look all around me,
As waist deep in dead canaries we stand.

D.J. Ludlow Copyright 2001

An Island Place

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Look Up", They Say, "Look Up""
Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Whoa! so deep and so full of pain!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
A really powerful commentary in poetry form, DJ. Leaves one with a stark impression and sadness. Bravo, a fine work.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
A powerful poem, D.J., couched in the smoothest of verses. An ode to miners who carry the burden of an industry.
Write on!
Leland


New Poetry by D.J. Ludlow
Popular Poetry (Mainstream)
  1.  Nolan Xavier Wells
  2.  NINE/ELEVEN
  3.  Leadership: American Style
  4.  Flood
  5.  Fleeting Verse
  6.  Prayers for J. Allen
  7.  Losing You
  8.  The Arbitrage of Solitude
  9.  Intimacy
  10.  HORSE-SHIT !
  11.  STREAMS OF MEMORIES
  12.  Walls and Dreams
  13.  My Last Request
  14.  Rub Off
  15.  I Only Know...Once Again, We Mourn! Or
  16.  See Something, Say Something
  17.  My life, is this the end?
  18.  Future
  19.  Seasons Of Life
  20.  How are We Doing?
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

C L E A R by Asa Seeley

The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet  
Member BookAds

The Wholly Book of Exodus by Jay Dubya

The Wholly Book of Exodus is humorous adult literature that features adult language, situations and content. It is the companion book of Jay Dubya's The Wholly Book of Genesis that satires the entire first book of the Bible. The Wholly Book  
Member BookAds

The Bracelet by Todd Cheney

A mechanic is sent a bracelet that can be used to wish for anything once a day.  
Member BookAds