(Was in a discussion the other day and got accused of having a closed mind simply because I didn't agree with them. I pointed out that as a reasoned response it was a pretty nonsensical argument that could be said from either side and proved nothing.
BUT it did get me to thinking about this whole open mind / closed mind label people like to run around sticking on others. And it inspired this little poem about this fictious young fella.
For the record though I like to believe my mind is neither open nor closed, rather it is controlled. I control what goes in and what comes out.)
I knew a young fella,
Sound of mind, clear of doubt
Of demeanour sober
And of faith devout.
And he had a job
And he had a wife,
The respect of his peers
And a heart full of life.
‘Til one day a man came by
Clothes shabby, glasses dark.
Held nothing sacred
And thought life a lark.
And he said to the fella
Your as straight as a dye
Don’t ever question
Just bought the lie.
To open a closed mind
Here’s what you need
And he gave him a match
And he gave him a weed.
So he stuck it in his face
And he puffed and puffed
Pretty soon he was hooked
Then he couldn’t get enough.
Then it wasn't free
And he’d lie and steal
And do anything he could
Just to make another deal.
And he gained some trouble
And he gained some strife,
And he lost his job
And he lost his wife.
And I had to conclude
That without a doubt
He had opened his mind...
And let his brains fall out!
I don't fancy the way people judge anymore. The hypocrites are only teaching the youth and the youth will walk in the footsteps of the hypocrites before them; but there is always those few that walk away into their own land, listening to their own song, laughing at their own humour and mocking their own misery. I truly think you're one of those special people with a fathomless talent beyond norm and a heart as wide as the ocean.
Never met a close-minded person with a heart as big as yours.
Your poetry strikes with a radiance as bright as Heaven.
-br-
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 9, 2003
I loved this...
Cleverly done and
with style..:)
~Excellent!
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Imogene, a country-bred girl, longs to make a life for herself in New York City. She joins forces with her former college roommate to start a movie production company in the big city.
~Nikki~
Never met a close-minded person with a heart as big as yours.
Your poetry strikes with a radiance as bright as Heaven.
-br-
Cleverly done and
with style..:)
~Excellent!
~~Linda~~