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butt wash
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sometimes shoes fit, in this case if it don't, move on or pick your bone.


Soap and water,
can clean your dirty butt.
But what will clean,
that hateful evil mind?
Certainly not Russian whiskey,
or French wine.

Passing judgement
with a racial hateful brain,
showering bull down
that should go down the toilet drain.
Who are you to judge,
all clogged up with toilet sludge?

Your butt stink,
just like the words you ink.
Mess around here drunk,
I'll flush your whole stinking butt punk.
Write when you're sober fool,
your evil has less of a stinking drool.

G


 
   

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 Reviews of "butt wash"
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Whoa G!!! "Your butt stink, just like the words you ink..."

I'd say, well expressed! Great one!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Powerful and well stated Grady!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Wow! Who is foolish enough to mess with the wizard of words?
Well done Sir Grady!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Mark Carroll
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Bravo, direct and to the point.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
interesting...

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
the title grabbed me. i am glad i stopped by. a very good write with a good message behind it; very well done, grady!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Oh damn, I didn't know I stunk, time for a shower & personally I can't write drunk, its hard to write when lying on the floor...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Oh Boy...what a write...sighhhh!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Grady,
I couldn't help after seeing the title but to find what was on the other side.
No need to sharpen the blade, they'll wound themselves without any help.
Excellent rant!

Lisa

Reviewed on June 9, 2005

Striking composition. Here, "butt wash" is
cleaning up with "SoapWORDS".

Healthy Understanding Day, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Leave them alone; let them drown in their own turds!...

Good vent, Grady!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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