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Dis Witting Skool
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Thought I'd make a little fun over our writing school around here. Personally I appreciate all who try, truly, but you really can't learn how to write on AD. Once we get here, we either have it or don't. This is public view and it takes nerve to even write here. I don't waste my time on what I don't have but I should. I just write and try to have fun with what I already know. It's an adventure in the red. I've learned to use humor in situations where I know I have a problem, it makes life easier too take. Then I go on and try to learn better or correct. One thing I don't do is let my mistake stop me.


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I's payed mi tuition,
so I's shuld git som wekinition,
along wit som good leson.
My witting is not perfect,
sho's it needs to be corwect.
Guess I's mes up mi day,
worry it ah way
over gwamma arrows.


Tu all mi instructurs,
u'r de bwest cowectors.
I's dont nos whatt I du,
wit out u.
U lik bird n ski,
castng a eagle eyi.
Swup down wit yo red ink,
down mi wurd sinc.


Dis witting skuul shuld git a,
fo itz cowecting wai.
It sho is de beast,
jus waittng tu feast.
I dun't sob,
eye hav day job.
Witting fo fun
pay chek none.


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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
This one is too cute! Lol, love Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Hey, Grady. You speak the truth my friend. Thanks for sharing the wit and humor within your verses. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Guess we went to the same school...Grady..Damn did you have to tell on me huh??

dis is mi plys to bee the gramafool...but damn I think this wryte is kewl!!

Laf Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Bery guud job 1 .

Michael

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Witting fo fun
pay chek none.

I here ya, here - Wite On!

Reviewed on December 15, 2006
This is a funny one, Grady! I got a good chuckle out of this one. Thank you!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
I hear ya on the paycheck...this is so funny One~ especially...

"...U lik bird n ski,

castng a eagle eyi.

Swup down wit yo red ink,

down mi wurd sinc.

LOL! Feel free to "corwect" me "too"! "too"! "too"! Smiles!

Love and Peace~

Kimmy~



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