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old Habits
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Most of the young rabbits around my house have gotten old, they either died or got eaten. I feel eaten, because this verse got me beaten, and with my writing it sure is competing.


Said I was going to stay out of this den,
yet here I am again.
Old habits,
don't die like old rabbits.
This verse writing is addicting,
more or less restricting.


I can spend a whole day here
reading and writing,
which I do find exciting.
But I'm trying to write another book,
however my verse steals time like a crook.
It has no conscious at all,
especially when the itch comes to call.


Hippity hop do the flip flop,
I won't stop,
So I'm going to negotiate,
do both if they coorporate.
One thing about being too busy,
sometimes it can make one dizzy
.


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Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
You'll always be dizzy, Too! :)
Glad to see you back!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
Loved it! But you know the great thing is we are all in the same boat here! No one to pass judgement on any of us, for we all find ourselves being addicted to words, rhyme, stories, reading, and writing....our habits could be a lot worse! I know others who spend their time online and it's not reading great poetry or stories...so all in all I think we are okay. I am anxious to purchase your book my friend! I'll let you know when I get it! Good luck with the next one!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on January 19, 2008
It sure can
but you will win
take it one day a time
with your rhymes
and another for your book
that will get you hooked!
Love ya' heart "ONE" and I'm glad
you are HERE!
I would miss these catchy writes!
as I sip my sprite
you sure are a delight
as bunnies run to and fro
this you seem to know
just don't give them
the heave ho
be on the down lo.
Rest when you can
then come write
in this den!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
BTW Easter is almost here! BEWARE!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Watchin them bunnies
hippity hop funnies
noses wiggling and I am giggling
growing older and colder and bolder
one hops up upon my knee
and in glee he says to me
"What you lookin at, Sucker!"

Ted
(see, it's catching!)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Yes,and I am so happy you are in here darlin,because I have missed you big time,,excellent writing sweetie..your number one in my books all the time darlin..glad your feelin better ,makes me so happy..have a wonderful evening sweet sweet man.....HUgssssssssssssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoox

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
well-from one of your readers-i am glad!!

Reviewed by mario lew (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
From one returnee to another... Bravo!


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