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Your Secret
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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may become everyones business...

Just keep on writing,
there'll be an alien sighting.
You'll be the alien,
your verse will be the tell all,
especially when others come to call.

Knock, knock,
come in Moses.

They don't get it,
I grew up in Pharoah's palace.
I had to flee to save my people,
I was chased by Pharoah and his army.
But I didn't have to worry about
the back lash,
because God had my back.

They threw Daniel in the lions den,
God showed up again.
A book called the bible
was planted here on earth,
for what it's worth,
baby Jesus entered by birth.

Now you know that I believe,
but some of my verse may decieve.
If we verse too much,
we'll either lose or keep in touch.
Sometime I lose,
sometime I win,
but each day I do it again.

OnepoetGem
 

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 Reviews of "Your Secret"
Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Very interesting and entertaining prose filled with so many messages that we somehow don't think about or take for granted. God bless you. Thanks for sharing, Gloria

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
So very witty!

Chrissy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
And you do it very well! Fine poem,and it's a joy
to see someone unafraid to mention the Bible!!!wtg

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
was chased by Pharoah and his army.
But I didn't have to worry about
the back lash,
because God had my back.
It worked for Moses and it works for us.
God has our back
Great write.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Enjoyed these wise words and perfect rhyme Grady.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Good write and again you have successfully ended well. Lady J

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
My favorite line "but each day I do it again" --- Trying every day to overcome my inadequacies and building on my strengths. His love sustains me.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
love your writing--pure, real and human!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
What can I say after Chantilly Lace's remarks? I particularly like your last line..applauding you for it,
Gina

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh,I got a secret..I think you are wonderful sweet sweet man.....Hugssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxoxo


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