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Ratting
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Verse curse..

While the sun is setting,
there maybe end of the day regretting.
verse isn't anything but ratting.
Telling on yourself,
you might as well open up the store shelf.


Let all the customers in,
especially if you write somewhere like the den.
Everyone that doesn't review,
might be a blessing to you.
At least part of your business won't be out,
as your verse takes route.


Down this poetic road I go,
where I will end up I don't know.
With this verse I travel,
hopefully something good will unravel.
It might be better to cut the connection,
instead of going the poetic direction.
Might as well start yelling,
most poets are sure telling.


But maybe this is only in my world.


OnepoetGem


 


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 Reviews of "Ratting"
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Many a great write was inspired by the truth so I believe if we so write we are strong enough to weather any storm that comes our way. Lady J

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
i think that writers, as a whole, put themselves "out there" to be read--we tend to reveal our souls quietly--behind the safety of ink and paper, computers and pseudo names--our choice--our passion

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
You can take it whatever it is...
Ron

Reviewed on February 29, 2008
GEM,

Hear you - when we post, we open ourselves up and hope someone responds. Number of trackers never equal to the number of reviews - know people are busy, but dang - not supposed to write for others, but for ourselves - still and all, it would be nice to know someone appreciates you for your words - let us know they dropped in and read - excellent.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 29, 2008
It's frustrating when I don't get the review on my stories whereas my poems keep getting the reviews. If people like the way I write stories, they should at least say something; that's not asking to much! Great rant; keep on keepin' on, and as long as you write, you know I'll read/review! I love your style, dude!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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