While the sun is setting,
there maybe end of the day regretting.
verse isn't anything but ratting.
Telling on yourself,
you might as well open up the store shelf.
Let all the customers in,
especially if you write somewhere like the den.
Everyone that doesn't review,
might be a blessing to you.
At least part of your business won't be out,
as your verse takes route.
Down this poetic road I go,
where I will end up I don't know.
With this verse I travel,
hopefully something good will unravel.
It might be better to cut the connection,
instead of going the poetic direction.
Might as well start yelling,
most poets are sure telling.
But maybe this is only in my world.
OnepoetGem
Ron
Hear you - when we post, we open ourselves up and hope someone responds. Number of trackers never equal to the number of reviews - know people are busy, but dang - not supposed to write for others, but for ourselves - still and all, it would be nice to know someone appreciates you for your words - let us know they dropped in and read - excellent.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(