A fictional poem of action, doing provides more satisfaction.
My love for you is true ,
there's nothing in this world I wouldn't do.
I would do this,
and I would do that,
there's nothing I wouldn't forget,
all your loving needs would be met.
This I would do,
everything I could do.
While everyone else is doing the do,
I would be serving you.
I would serve you hot,
or I would serve you not.
Every do would be love true ,
I'd do until you were through.
So my love should we do the do,
I leave this up to you?
Do let me know,
so our love can get on the go.
I hope you do want our love to grow.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Oh my,do do do..sweet sweet man...hugss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
by all means, do do the do!
catchy as this little ditty is, I can't help but wonder about the extent to which its zesty spunk makes up for the punch it lacks through glibly crafted "pat" rhymes and phrases... I do, I do, I do not doubt the genuine feeling that prompted the barrage of somewhat trite rhymes, but I challenge OnepoetGem to dig a little deeper for the other posts you write which I look forward to reading! Nice bouncy rhythms and a boisterous little razzle dazzle feel to this one though. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
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Well done Grady!!
Love Tinka
God bless you. Kathy
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo
catchy as this little ditty is, I can't help but wonder about the extent to which its zesty spunk makes up for the punch it lacks through glibly crafted "pat" rhymes and phrases... I do, I do, I do not doubt the genuine feeling that prompted the barrage of somewhat trite rhymes, but I challenge OnepoetGem to dig a little deeper for the other posts you write which I look forward to reading! Nice bouncy rhythms and a boisterous little razzle dazzle feel to this one though. Thanks for sharing your talent.