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Poetic Feel
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A little contradiction here on writing verse.

These words rub me,
I rub them back.
Joggle them around,
my body never leaves the ground.
But mentally I fly,
that is until my mind wonders why.

Writing around this poetic den,
versing every thought I get again,
holding no words but this I might regret.
Throwing out my verse,
not even worrying if it's good or worse.
Every darn day I get this poetic thirst,
so I waste no time getting to the den first.

I feel like a jack rabbit,
because of this poetic habit.
Bottle of wine leave me alone,
let me go home and start over.
Even though I don't drink,
I can't get away from what I think,
or how I ink,
sometimes I feel like a ship
that won't sink,
then my eyes open and I blink.
This verse almost feels like a good drink.
I love it,
but sometimes I'd like to shove it.

OnepoetGem

 

 


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 Reviews of "Poetic Feel"
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I feel the inner 'angst' at work here...

Chrissy

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
its like an addiction
Peace Brother

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
what a fun lyrical write!

Reviewed on March 7, 2008


One, heeeheee I like this believable. Oh you are doing fantastic wishing you all the best.

Keep penning and take the best of care,
~Gwendolyn



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