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Heart Hit
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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A fictional romantic poem expressing love wrote in the singular.


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Your love fell on me like
a ton of bricks,
I am a man of vanity,
I have no tricks.
I would never hire a magician,
but instead I think I need
a heart physician.

After your love blast,
my heart is beating too fast.
I refuse to go to
the doctor you know,
because I really don't
want this heart to slow.

I'm a sucker for your love kiss,
I want to keep my honey bliss.
As long as this love remain,
it will keep my world sane.
I reach out to your lovely hand,
freeze up the hour glass sand,
enjoying this feeling so grand.

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 Reviews of "Heart Hit"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
Good loving write and good tribute to love. Wish I had my love back in my life, but he is with me in spirit. Good writing and hit my heart too.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
you just keep getting better!!!! This is loaded with sweets and lots of sugar...from the first line to the very last, and your art work is beautiful too, I remember you saying they were yours?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Your love fell on me like
a ton of bricks

Amazing how that happens some times!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Oh my,beautiful writing from such a loving and sweet sweet man...enjoy your day and be safe ...Hugssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Very sweet write, Gem; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Sweet words!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
wonderfully expressed!


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