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Stone One
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Let he without sin cast the first stone, and the rocks start flying.

Ouch that hurts, the thought of it flirts. In coming stones, trying to break my bones. Can't break what is already broke. But it can be made worse, not any worse than addiction to this verse. The stone throwers, sure aren't love growers. There's a twist, not enough rocks exist. Look over your shoulder, watchout for the big boulder, he is the holy beholder. When He comes down, rocks fall to the ground. Hate gets shifted, rocks can't be lifted. OnepoetGem

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Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 20, 2008

Those that throw the first stone
Are the ones that dwell at the bottom of the ocean
"Bottom feeders", whale shit eaters
Well, well Grady, look what you done to me
You are making me a rhymer
So a rhymer I'll be.
Peace Brother

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 20, 2008

i love your thinking here--good verse1

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

A wise write my friend...I love the first line...I agree with this and it is words to live by. As I say, I always try to keep my duck out of the puddle that is troubled, or my horse out the race when it becomes too competitive...it's easier to get along with others if we simply mind our own business and take care of numero uno! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Reminds Me My Drummer Friend,i.e. Always Stoned--Boozing It-- Comes To CA Visit --Runs My Phone Bill Up Heart Broken Goes Back To See Chick-- Stoned-- Winter Snow Ice Driveway Steals Two Marble Lions From Corner Posts, Falls Breaks His Ass And 2 Marble Lions ...

Rocks Can't Be Lifted,i.e. Her Momma Sends 18 Year Old Chick To Belgium --In COLLEGE To Make Them Break Up--As Far As I Know He's Still On Rocks Boozing Himself To Death In PA ...

Lot Of Truth In Your (His Elude(ing) Write,i.e There's No (Escape) Easy Way Out....

TRASK

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Your mind is working overtime, methinks, Gem, for the poetic truths...well done...
Blessings ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Love it for sure. Liz

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Love the way your mind works, One!Good one!...ET

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Love it!

Elizabeth

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