Through your verse I see you
from your reviews I read too
Even when you do not make
an appearence I see you clearer
You couldn't be nearer
Peekaboo I see you
What I see I really don't like
I know you wish I'd take a hike
I throw no curves
I know I get on your nerves
Maybe I'm wrong
I don't mind being wrong
if you're happy where you belong
I could be peeking through
paranoid eyes
still feeling the pain that came
by surprise
Then again it was no disguise
I expected the visit from out beyond
I lost it in the way I respond
Very few of us properly handle
not so good incoming
many find it really numbing
What I see I really don't like
I know you wish I'd take a hike.
Not so. Keep writing. This was well crafted.
God Bless,
Lew
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Excellent writing sweet sweet man..as always wonderful..I am going out of town for a bit..see you soon OK..I miss you...be well and always safe...Hugs...Peekaboo too you darlin...(Giggles)
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoox
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I know you wish I'd take a hike.
Not so. Keep writing. This was well crafted.
God Bless,
Lew
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoox
A critique on critique?
Peekaboo to you too!
Fun writ.
Thank you, ~Donna.
and in rhyme no less! Excellent poem!
Love,
Eileen