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2 Loving People
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Love and romance takes two, but when one doesn't act right, what will you do?


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Adam and Eve in the Garden
the beginning of our love starting
Unless you have two loving
people involved
nothing will get solved
Even when you have two loving
people involved
hardly anything gets solved

The devil came between first
woman and man
stuck a red delicious apple in
their loving plan
There's always something that
will come between
makes no difference if you are a
king or queen

Any man trying to stand alone
is nothing when his woman is gone
Any woman trying to stand alone
might want to keep her man
close to the throne
But if one can not stand alone
he or she is as good as gone
Cause two loving people don't
always work
especially if either one of them
is an arrogant jerk
Love won't work

opg

 


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 Reviews of "2 Loving People"
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 30, 2009
I Don't Love Nor Hate People,i.e. I GIVE THEM YOU ALL BENEFIT OF THAT DOUBT....

Keeep Em Comen....


TRASK

Reviewed on August 30, 2009
Ooooh...you're thinking deep, again, Grady! Should be some compromising going on, 'tho...huh...?
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
It's hard to work with an arrogant jerk. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
absolutely right!

Reviewed on August 29, 2009
OPG,

Interesting take on love. Takes two to make a relationship. And if one doesn't contribute it's nothing, been there, done that. Many people have I'm sure. Well written poem, says an awful lot.

Mary

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
Wise reflections, my friend. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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