Thanks to all my friends and others who stuck with me through this negative versing spell.
Here lately my verse hasn't
been that nice
My friends could tell
they be on me like white on rice
I felt the mean direction
so now I'm making a dissection
which leads to this poetic connection
None of us have to be guessing
verse is about expressing
We all have a dump ground in
our heads
where we place past hurts and dreads
Wisdom dictates letting it stay sleeping
in its beds
However it's hard to hold in pain
sometimes as writers and poets
storm burst showers down the rain
right to our poetic site
and it may cause a fight
or some type fright
until we see the light
that it may not be right
Mr. OPG, now that I've met you and understand where your pain comes from, I can read you without feeling your dislike, or even hatred directed at me as a white man. I did enjoy this poem and look forward to reading more of you in the future. I think that I'd like to sign off as: Your friend, Mark.
a lovely and honest and humble offering-awesome! i think that we all express through our writing-often we express hurt pain and anger as well as all the lovely part of life-have a wonderful day--
You Better Make Best Of What You Got Left,i.e. Means Your Own SANITY!
We All Go Through Our Own Pain Suffering Obviously What Happens In Our Childhood...
REMEMBER In My 1st Published Books:
If You Cannot Be Thankful For What You Receive
Then Be Thankful For That Which You (I) Escape...
AND: (God) Does Know I Have Escape(d) My Horrid Past....
TRASK...