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Breathtaking
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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(First love affair.)

Going back,

down loves track,

An exciting moment for a love pair,

took away two young breaths of air,

Sighing

Crying

Defying

the taboo,

not to screw.

Caught in the moment of excitement,

hell bent

with no relent

to screw ourselves out with no repent.


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 Reviews of "Breathtaking"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
A moment in time .......fine work

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
ahhhhhh
great style
you got me smiling!
ty ty ty
lol
Anita

Reviewed by Deborah Carter
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
ahh grady...how true....a wonderful poem
Deborah

Reviewed by Handsum-Hart
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Gee is this what young people do, lol

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
I think John said it best: "And why not?" There is something to be said for being young and foolish. {insert huge grin}

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Well done, but never live in the past of what you didn't have and go for it today.

Nancy

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
I think Mr.David said it best. I had many painful memories. Good job,Grady


tony

Reviewed on April 29, 2003
grady, you are too much! you are such a hoot; this poem had me LAUGHING! i needed it; thanks for the grins! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Ha..quite funny!

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Hormones raged and I remember those days....oh my....nice job!

Reviewed on April 29, 2003
LOLOL you bad boy, you. *grins* great, hysterical write...you bad boy, you. *grins* LOL at james david...YOU bad boy, you! :) you are too, too much, grady...and i'm glad i know you and am honored to count you friend *even though you are a bad boy LOL* (((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. *still chuckling QUIT my sides*

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
:) and why not .. enjoyed J & J

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Oh Grady,
This is so excellent and it is so taboo {SMILES}}
Peggy

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
1976...Melissa... the day I got my driver's licence... drove and parked all night...had blueballs for a month. ...Priceless.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
I like "not a screw" ...lol Grady this is so you. I like. Teresa

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
those were the days my friend.....


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