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Giving In Too Love
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(We were both in the process of loosing control with each other.)
She was hugging me tight Seems with all her might Her loving grip felt out of sight As her lips met mine Shivers went down my spine I was in loves fantasy land Enjoying this love grandstand It felt so wild Like we were back to being the virgin child When love was new When we had no real clue What to really do As my mind focused back I knew we were right on track Neither of us was resistant We wanted this to go the full distant Until the flame went out Then we shout Scream Gleam Lay and dream

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Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Oh I've walked that memory lane a few times!
Excellent! And hot!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Wahoo Grady this was a FANTASTIC Write all the way down to the dreamy end!:O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

YOu should be exhausted. [smiles]

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Hey Grady, chicks can do that to anybody. The lay and dream sound great though. Great rhyme! You are a rhyme champ!

yf
tony

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

sweet write, grady! well done, my friend! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Grady, WOW!!! this is sweat you never forget.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Aren't memories wonderful? Very sweet this was,,,Lisa

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