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Uncorrected Write
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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A peek into the world of mistakess before others eyes view.

Incorrected grammar,
bring on 'the correction hjammer.
Mispelled woresd briing
on the the dictionar;y,
wownm hthhis wrilting saure is scary.
grear t big fat hands on the keyboard,
I sure need thje bl;essionmings of the loord.


After the wrte is conmpletred,
it must be read over for mistakes,
mistakes casuse earrthequakes,
In review the eye catchers thje mistakwes,
then the red [penm strikes the work,
sometimes worse than ther devils fork.


Watching Conan talk to the alligator huntermm,
distracted by the tv can be a bummer,
Write and watch,
watch and write,
not good for the wqriting sight,
causingf mistakes on my si9te.


Ask not what yoor site can do for you,
but what can youndop fopr yo8ur sight.
Sometimes I wonder why I toreture
imyself trying to write.
Then have to end u-p in a fight,
so il;'ll just say good night,
and leave the site.
for now


My typing isn't that good, this is what I have to go through
everytime I hit the keyboard but I write on. Can you imagine that I typed a whole book? It was pure torture with these big fat fingers.


Sincerely


GEMorrison


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 Reviews of "Uncorrected Write"
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
I had to smile through this read, Grady, you always show me the pleasures of being positive. Your home must shine with love and tolerance, keep on shining, keep on writing. :)

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Grady,
You don't need big fingers to make mistakes. It's funny how they (the mistakes) sneak in without us knowing it. We think we have a perfect write, post it, then find that there are extra letters in our words or the letters are in the wrong order. Well, that's the way it goes, you have a good night, too.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
lol..i heard that, grady! i likes the humor and lightness behind this piece..one of these days, i'm gonna buy your book too!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
hheehhehehe,,,,,,,,haaaaaaaaaaahhahahahahah!!

Know the feeling!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 21, 2003
too cute, grady! a very clever write by a very wise and clever person whom i have come to love with all my heart and soul! love you, grady! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Very creative, Grady, hurt my brain to read!!

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Grady this is sooo imaginative. I loved it!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed on November 21, 2003
I can totally relate as I am dyslexic and I fear that often shows in my writing... Go figure LOL...
God Bless
~Michelle~


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