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Read & Enjoyed
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Whatever you wrote, negative or positive, mistakes or no mistakes, it is better than a blank page of nothing.

I blank my mind,
clear the slate,
prepare to absorb
your words of creation.
They travel in
 on energy rays,
electrify neurons,
stir up electrons.
The impact of new
worlds of discover land on
my mind. I'm in
your world, your
words guide me,
your verse fulfills me,
I'm no longer myself.


I'm you,
in your laugh,
a part of your smile,
ohhhhhhh! that pain hit
me, I understand, a tear
falls, but my joy icon
kicks in, I survive, travel
on, immune to your pain.
I wash away your trauma,
soak in the agony, a sunrise
occurs, I continue on,
your world captivates me,
I try to escape, return to
me, but your gravity
grips.


I realize I'm not home,
that I reside in another,
I do not judge, but I
learn, soak in lessons,
wish you well, then make
my final departure. 
Thanks for being yourself,
writing and expressing
your truth,
giving me
insight into you,
negative or positive,
read and enjoyed.


Sincerely.


G


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 Reviews of "Read & Enjoyed"
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
another great poem from the gradymeister! LOL enjoyed much; thanks for sharing!

have a very happy thanksgiving tomorrow; may it be full of love, hope, joy, much laughter, many happy memories, and bountiful blessings from above! god bless you, grady! love you, too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
Excellent analogy! great poem Grady!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
Write on Grady....and a happy thanksgiving to you and yours....bless you....floria

Reviewed on November 26, 2003
A great piece. It is good that you take our work so seriously. Thank you!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
I totally agree with this one Grady!!

Read and enjoy....no matter what the hurting heart or tears do to your soul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
I love it when I can read something and become a part of the verse or even manage to enter into the author's domain. Well done Grady. Lisa

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2003
Grady you speak the words so beautifully for all of us. Great write.
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
Hello Grady and excellent write.

Happy Thanks giving
Peg

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on November 25, 2003
Excellent, my friend. Poetry does transport us
to another world. Yours does for me.

ML, *Linda*


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