A BOUQUET OF EXQUISITE PROSE. JUST LOVELY! WELL DONE, MARYANN...ENJOYED. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Love "Hummingbird thy heartbeat's song!" Not sure what "lair" means in that context, but I like the look and feel of poem, and you chose the perfect way to illustrate it! Play ON!!
while i'm not keen on some of your word
choices here, Mary Ann - it's purely a personal thing
with me and not a reflection on you - i'm more than keen
on the tone and theme of the work and the control in
its delivery; it has its special atmosphere and that is
always the mark of distinction
...."Hummingbird thy heartbeat's song"...I can hear and feel
the antiphonal birds (singing) calls and remember Thoreau's words:
.."Here is a bird in whose strain the story is told.
Whenever a man hears it, he is young and nature is in her spring;
whenever he hears it, there is a new world and one country, and the gates of heaven are not shut against him".
Thank you Mary Ann for sharing your poem.
Warm regards. Isabella
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Peace, love and Easter Blessings,
John Michael Domino
Beautiful!!
Teresa
Regis
Blessings, xx
Christine
with Love so Majestic!! The
Irish in me singing in tune
Lady Vivian
choices here, Mary Ann - it's purely a personal thing
with me and not a reflection on you - i'm more than keen
on the tone and theme of the work and the control in
its delivery; it has its special atmosphere and that is
always the mark of distinction
yes!
john
Peace & love be with you
William
the antiphonal birds (singing) calls and remember Thoreau's words:
.."Here is a bird in whose strain the story is told.
Whenever a man hears it, he is young and nature is in her spring;
whenever he hears it, there is a new world and one country, and the gates of heaven are not shut against him".
Thank you Mary Ann for sharing your poem.
Warm regards. Isabella
played here "Lady Mary Ann"
A tune that flutters upon the heart of
this ting bird gracefully...
Love and Light
Lily
Anna