I drank martinis under the cold moon,
reciting poetry for the sun's break
and I accepted drink perhaps too soon
The words spilled forth, languid from a cold noon,
while at the Vesuvio, for the sake
of another bright San Franciscan moon
I could see, blurrily, the older rune
they wrote to remember mouths warming wake
from a winter perpetually soon
Death would ride the bridle of the quiet loon,
mad for life, likening to a close take
of the sun enveloping the new moon
Belonging to the people of soft doom
fairy dust scatters with lust to find fake
faces amongst the new Johnny come soons
I sat, writing in North Beach, weaving loom
of times long gone, forest, mountain, and lake
as they shimmered of the pale placid moon,
inebriated from drinking too soon
I enjoyed this one, Tyler, also I have been to San Francisco a long time ago and this brought back some great memories...
Sara (UK)
Editor, Poetry Life & Times
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Though I not be familiar with all forms of poetry Tyler those of yours that I have read I must say I do consider this your best. A truly beautiful piece to read that just flowed from my lips as I read it aloud!
~Nikki~
Imogene, a country-bred girl, longs to make a life for herself in New York City. She joins forces with her former college roommate to start a movie production company in the big city.
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Sara (UK)
Editor, Poetry Life & Times
~Nikki~
I see that You have changed the "Quatrain" form for villanele. It ends with the first and third line of the first stanza. You decided to change that!
Glad to know that You are giving some time to Poetry.
May You enjoy an accomplishing blissful week.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU