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Alone in the Dark
by David Blair → (All Poetry by David Blair)
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She left me, the love of my life. I lost my job and marriage needs money to oil over difficulties. Now I had so little. She caught a train to the City. I never hear from her or our kid. That breaks my heart alone in the dark. I lie in the night thinking terrible thoughts how to end the misery. And as if to mock me I hear the Central train on the hour...every long hour.

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Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on September 23, 2012

I hope this poem is just an expression of your poetic license and has not happened to you in reality for it is just too sad to imagine. I am sending happiness and blessings your way.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 9, 2010

Stabs like a knife to the heart.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 7, 2010

powerfully emotive ...

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on August 7, 2010

David,

This is so sad, and a commentary on how the economy can destroy people's lives. But more than that, I can feel your deep pain at losing your loved ones. This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sorry for your loss.

Mary

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on August 7, 2010

heart pierceing piece...write write write

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 7, 2010

So direct and honest, David.
Take good care.

John

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

Haunting and sad. Great writing though. I'm sure the minutes seem like hours. Transform the pain into words. Magical things will happen. Don't listen to your head too much. I've been through this myself. Absent the trains.

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on August 6, 2010

a sad poem, David. I hope it didn't happen to you. Laurel

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