Im so broken,
uncontrolled,
slipping back into the fold
of being
made from stone.
I am ice cold,
rock solid,
unfeeling as iron.
Dont you just love
what Ive become.
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Reviews of "Hard and Dead Inside"
Reviewed by Michelle Carucci (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Sad and cruel sounding. Makes me think of a statue that was once a man.
Reviewed by Carissa Brookens (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2003
wow i love it
so few words,
but the message is strong
keep it up
It is tragic when some realize that they become the creation of lifes twists and turns as well as love's failures to consumate mind, heart and soul. Great work and thank you for your review as well.
Amor
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so few words,
but the message is strong
keep it up
--Cj--
Lm
Sandie Angel :o)
Amor
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