We would lye down
side by side
pressed against eachother,
all bare feet
and kissing.
You took my breath
and gave me life
in the same moment.
And we were nothing
but hands,
touching soft,
and fingertips
worshipping taut skin.
Our lips
brushing under clothing,
tasting everything
we could get.
And suddenly,
clothing was too much,
it kept us apart,
so in the dark
we abandoned them
for naked bodies.
And before then,
I never knew the meaning
of being able to feel,
but you,
in this world,
made gentle
sound like nails.
Im only alive
with your love
inside me.
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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
I really like the barefoot and kissing part.... Sex is oooh-but nothing compares to love... This is great Jason. Teresa
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
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Well done.
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