You're the soft song
in a metal world
that I'll crave to taste
until I'm unmade,
because I would die for you,
stay alive for you,
and there's nothing I wont do
for just a taste
of your tender favor.
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Reviewed by Jessica Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2003
You are such a romantic! You write with such longing! It makes me wonder who these poems could be about.
Jason,
I love the opening line in this! And your ending is pretty strong too! <smiles>
"and there's nothing I wont do
for just a taste
of your tender favor"
What can I say, I love poetry that has
that "I have to be with you now" feel to it!
Hugs,
Maria
You're the soft song
in a metal world
that I'll crave to taste
until I'm unmade,
because I would die for you,
stay alive for you,
and there's nothing I wont do
for just a taste
of your tender favor.
what a passionate write.. romance with a hot flare
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I love the opening line in this! And your ending is pretty strong too! <smiles>
"and there's nothing I wont do
for just a taste
of your tender favor"
What can I say, I love poetry that has
that "I have to be with you now" feel to it!
Hugs,
Maria
in a metal world
that I'll crave to taste
until I'm unmade,
because I would die for you,
stay alive for you,
and there's nothing I wont do
for just a taste
of your tender favor.
what a passionate write.. romance with a hot flare
You're just one romantic guy! Good write!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)