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Why
by Nancy D. → (All Poetry by Nancy D.)
  
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I know your there

Why are you hurting me

Tell me is something wrong

The knife in my back the pain bad enough

But the burning as you slowly turn that knife hurts more than you know

I don't believe in voo doo dolls

Where one can inflict pain when desired

I can only pray you come to your senses

Come face to face

And I thank God it is my back and not my heart you stabbed

Nancy
02/05/2003


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 Reviews of "Why"
Reviewed on February 8, 2003
I agree with everyone, this is a powerful write of emotion.

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2003
very strong and emotional Nancy, and very well done...Mark

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 7, 2003
powerful imagery

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on February 6, 2003
Very powerful expression of pain Nancy. Excellent.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 6, 2003
I feel the pain all the way down here...
The knife in my back
I know that pain is bad enough to kill you
very heartfelt write sweety
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on February 6, 2003
I felt this one. Great job, Nancy.
Jill

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Ouiichh, Nancy..this even hurts the unstabbed...

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
knives hurt where-ever they are stuck...but your say of it is very good!

Reviewed by Gilles
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
I see that you too have recieved the knife in the back, I too have many holes to fill!
Great write!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Excellent Nancy! gripping and intensely felt...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Very Painful write but very excellent.

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
WOW!,
I feel the pain all the way over here. Hope it gets fixed quickly.

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Very nice Nancy!
Jack

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Nancy,
painful write.
"

I know your there

Why are you hurting me

Tell me is something wrong

The knife in my back the pain bad enough "
So excellent.
peg


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