I Don't Want To Hide (poem) by Nancy D. on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by None None (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Find inner peace with yourself and let the
ink flow.

Reviewed on February 25, 2003

I am so glad you stayed....With God you have power use his strength always he wont desert ever.
With sincere affection
from
Kay

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Excellent ... U will know what u have to do at the right time. Now its ur relaxing time.

We does or work at time. i believe its a natural process .. we human being are just backing up. Work hard for the improvement and perfection. That is what we do. All other things go accordingly ...

~Sanilnath

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

"I DON'T WANT TO HIDE" is the emotion poemized to flow; it is poetized to let the message be known. It is a sensitive and profound piece of art. The author has expressed it in full.
"Never rest your pen; don't let your quills dry", that is what I recommend this great author, and:
�MAKE IT FLOW�

Let your heart synchronize wonders,
Let your pen show them in full;
When your heart feels love and ponders
Let your heart synchronize wonders!
Let your love be your life�s bonder,
Filling with wisdom your skull;
Let your heart synchronize wonders,
Let your pen show them in full!
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May the author of "I DON'T WANT TO HIDE" enjoy a long healthy happy life.
My admiration and my respect.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

write it out.....i think we will understand.this is a great start.....

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

This is very touchy write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

{{ Nancy }}
Am not sure I know what this is about sweetie. but I know your voice is important, and the Den would not be as bright of a place should you allow someone or something to cause you to stop sharing your wonderful words. If you ever need to talk, I am always a heart beat away. Just drop me a note, ok? dreamweaver.702com.net

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Me either

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

Try and share this with someone Nancy..because there are so many here who care and want to help.
*Hug* Chrissie x

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Time has a way of fixing lots of things take it slow keep writing for I enjoy your poems

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

We are here, Nancy. Disturbing write. And I think you should just be able write and not be questioned for your ability. Hugs to you, sweetie. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

A very touching wtire,

William

Reviewed by e

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Remember you have ways to contact members;-) excellent write Nancy...

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

i know not if fiction or reality i know the feeling of wanting to hide though!! so you really touched me deep with this poem excellently written

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Hi Nancy, I wish I knew more about what was eating at you so I could give you advise. This place is really comforting and pretty cool. People of divergent backgrounds and beliefs squatting on this fertile internet ground. All leaning on each other hoping for relief.

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Stick in there kid, it will be fixed.

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Hang in there Nancy.
Jack

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Nancy, you've begun doing the right thing. You're talking about it and now someone has heard you. The mind can conquor all, if only you will allow the healing power to begin. I believe you have already started.